All Comments on 'Mine Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Agree with Anon from USA

I have to agree with Anon from USA. This is getting slightly disturbing for romance...

DuskyGirlDuskyGirlabout 17 years ago
something about jake...

jake is way creepy but there's still something compelling about him...he's still sexy. i really like your creation of him as a villain/lover.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very disturbing

this story seemed pretty interesting at first but now the twist is downright disturbing, this seems like rape and kidnapping and Jakes seems like a psycho

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Yes twisted...

I agree...plz don't have him kill her..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
getting better and better!!

I don't know how this will all end, but can't wait to find out!! Again great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
twisted

girl he is twisted please don't have him to obsessed that he would kill her.

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