by Foxfan69
...is no good play on words. Seriously, you shouldn't have used it more than once.
I really like this story! There's only one thing to add, other than a sequel. What I'd to have seen, is more interaction between Brenda and Donna. A girl/girl scene would be nice, but a little hugging and kissing goes a long way, also! Either way, keep writing and I'll certainly keep reading!