All Comments on 'Mini-Skirts & Legs'

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gotranegotraneover 10 years ago
Very Nice!

I really like this story! There's only one thing to add, other than a sequel. What I'd to have seen, is more interaction between Brenda and Donna. A girl/girl scene would be nice, but a little hugging and kissing goes a long way, also! Either way, keep writing and I'll certainly keep reading!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Sexcretion...

...is no good play on words. Seriously, you shouldn't have used it more than once.

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