All Comments on 'Miranda's Design Ch. 02'

by Futalover141

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
more?

i would be interested in seeing where this goes from here

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

About time someone writes a Mass Effect futa story. This story has a lot of potential, but I would like to request that you stay away from male penetration. It's a personal preference, and I don't have a problem with Shepard and Miranda in a future chapter; so long as Shepard isn't the "receiver".

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Nice short sequel. Why not go a bit risque by having the futa on male pairing you hint at in the beginning of this chapter, by having her paired up with Shepherd in a possible third part?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Liked it but a bit short compared to ch 1 although im eagerly awaiting ch 3 :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Loved it! Hopefully we'll get to see some other characters (coughTalicough) get in on the action in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I sure hope Miranda's Penis grows beyond any normal human sizes.

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