by Jackson Blacke
Yo that rap battling part was kinda lacking, basic syllable rhyming. Step those bars up.
Really enjoyed it.I'm glad you're going futher whith the story,hope to read more soon.
I was elated to see a new story from you, and what an epic tale! Great job and please keep writing. Love your style :)
keep writing this what you call shit. It isn't Shakespere, but it isn't shit either. A great read, nicely written and H-O-T.