All Comments on 'Missing Pieces'

one of the best stories thatI have read in a very long time keep writing

Red...this is easily my favorite by you. I enjoyed reading it the second time even more than the first. Simply lovely. Congrats!

WOW!!!!!! I WAS HOLDING MY BREATH AND ROOTING FOR THEM TO FIND EACH OTHER, YOU DID AN AWESOME AWESOME PIECE HERE RED. KEEP UP THE AWESOME JOB, I HOPE THERE WILL BE ANOTHER PART OF MISS SEREPHINA AND MR TERREL

DC:

the readers should be breaking down the doors to read and comment on this story. You know me and you know I've read most of your poems and stories. Lady; this is the crown to all that has gone before. Congratulations because you've surpassed your best and that is hard to do. Thank You. Ronnie W.

i loved the build up of the charactrs in this one. It's hot hot how, as only Red can do, but now she's making us feel more then just evny for her characters.

hot and sensual...Thank you for sharing with us. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Loved it I'll have to read it a lot more to give it proper justice.

it really wasn't the substance of the story. That isn't a complaint, just an observation. Well written Author. Really a story of romance and an almost missed life together.

Quite imaginative and nicely crafted. A question though. Is lustful hissing an island thing? Kidding, but it almost took me questionally off the flow.

Thanks Author - quality work - With high Regard

I really liked the characters in this story, Red, as well as the way you crafted the scenes. Very, very good!

interesting story line, well written, erotic and very romantic

Beautiful........

Loved this ... the story reminds me of "Fifty First Dates". As a local girl, I was impressed that you used the Kalalau Trail. Near the trail is a heiau dedicated to Laka and is extremely sacred, especially for hula dancers.