All Comments on 'Mistaken Identity? Ch. 02'

by LadysMan

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
good very hot

really enjoyed the story and it seems about to get alot hotter please continue it is starting to get really good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
HOT!!!

This is getting hot! Please continue the story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I think

I think Beth should be punnished in the next ch, I dont like her :)

Fantasy KissFantasy Kissalmost 19 years ago
I KNEW IT!

I knew it was beth with the husband! I'm getting used to your little twist and turns. lol. looks like you are gonna get that threesome. lol you are fun.

LadysManLadysManalmost 19 years agoAuthor
Stuck

I was stuck on this sequel for soooooooooooo long. I just got a bad case of writer's block. For me the writer's block was I knew the story TOO well. It made me bored with it and made me have a hard time writing it out.

Wish I could say I knew it was beth with the husband as well. Unfortunately, I didn't. That Beth. She's a real bitch isn't she? I'm a sucker for punishment.

get2nome61get2nome61over 4 years ago
More to cum

I would really like to see this past chapter 3 I believe you have a lot of wiggle room especially with the incest

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

Dude...you have a serious problem with continuity errors.

Kathleen walks out of the shower stark naked. Sherry asked to join them. Then Kathleen dropped her towel and stood there naked. Seriously?

4/5 only because Sherry is dumping her P.O.S. husband and wants a three-way with Kathleen.

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