All Comments on 'Moby Jane'

urgh. nothing remotely sexy but lots of blood and weird surgery. you're in the wrong website! this one is supposed to be hot and horny

I can honestly say I have never read anything quite like that before. You are very imaginative.. kinda gross.. but very imaginative.

I really honestly think you should make a second installment to this! it was so interesting. it kept me captivated. It was on the wrong site, but that's really ok. I've never read a story such as this one before. it was utterly amazing. pleez make another one! this was personally the best story I think I've ever read on this site. in the next one maybe they could discover a whale with a whole living family inside and find the mad scientists to crack down the case. this could be a really good book series! just...wow...!

You are a racist with a ridiculously small knowledge of science, and if you were a talented writer at all, I could look past the points where I disagree with you and appreciate the art of your work but sadly, I found none.

I sincerely hope you don't waste our time posting your bizarre nonsense again. If you find the need to do so, please do it on a site appropriate to the subject matter.

What the fuck did I just read.

It was not what I expected but good nontheless, should it be in Sci Fi or just labelled weird ?

If I was in a different mood, I could've understood the story better. This is really different and I'm sure there's potential. Don't mind the idiot a few comments back, you aren't racist.

Racism is putting one race above or below another--you didnt do anything of the sort.

Anyway, if it were another genre with a different plot, I'm sure I would've enjoyed it. Thanks for submitting. (: