All Comments on 'Momma Domme, Daddy Slave'

Very HOT...can`t wait for Part 2 and bringing the sister-in-law into the steamy action

Ive just noticed that near the beginning f the story i referred to James as Hannah twice. I missed it when i proofread the story, I'm not really sure how, it shouldn't make too much difference.

fucking hot

Really hot story, i can't believe that this isn't marked with one of those H's yet. I suppose it doesn't really matter though, keep up the good work

Really good, kept every thing very hard for the entire time it took to read it.

Father was so calm and cool, if it had been me, I'm sure that I would have been nervous as hell.

Is there going to be a ch. 4????

When he throws their asses into the street? Boy was this silly and unbelievable

....where daughter orders dad to kill that bitch mom. gg

Reminds me of "Mom is dominant, Mom is submissive" by ahabscribe, only here it's a daughter not a son and the mom doesn't end up submitting too. Actually, I guess it's not a bit like it, just reminds me of it, that's all. Very good, loved it. Will have to use my imagination to give it an ending!

Zoe

I liked it. There is a nice flow to it. The end was not what I expected.. But still, nice job.