All Comments on 'Mom's Queen Sized Bed'

Damn good story mate

It was too libido centered. Yet the action was undeniably hot. The author centered the story in bedroom and let promising subplots go fallow. There's no doubt that Momstheboss can nimbly write a scorching boudoir scene, but he could rank among top authors of this genre if he developed other aspects of his characters' lives

would love to hear more

The manipulative girlfriend, her unattractive mother, the neglect of his child? It's as if you wanted to inject a little bit of reality into a story, but instead of a few drops worth, we got the whole bottle. Her insistence that he ejaculate inside her when they started fucking? Is this guy mentally disabled, on top of everything else he doesn't have going on? There are only three reasons why any woman would demand that: she wants to get pregnant, she wants to get pregnant, or she wants to get pregnant. Forget about "warning signs": This should be bells, billboards, sirens, fireworks, and someone on a megaphone shouting "RUN AWAY! RUN AWAY!" Any sane person would have dropped that girl immediately.

And your description of his coercing his mother in law into sex?

"Had I not been riled up by sexual intent, my cock would have surely deflated seeing the large multi-flapped body before me."

The description of the actual "act" made me feel nauseous. (I'm not exaggerating.) Yeah, whatever sort of erection I was attempting to maintain while reading this story completely disappeared at that point. It never came back.

I've enjoyed many of your stories. This isn't one of them. Please don't revisit this premise of "dose of reality" writing.

At 19 years of age, the hero of the story is a nonstop semen producing machine, and both he and his mom know exactly where the boy's semen belongs. So he sticks his big hard cock up the same warm wet wonderful hole he came out of, pumps his own mother's cunt like a demon, and finishes by blowing his young balls up inside his mother's mommy-hole--aka, vagina, cunt, twat, or best of all son's semen-catcher.

You have decent story ideas, and I have enjoyed reading some of them, but the enjoyment starts to dissipate when I have to stop and make corrections in my head throughout the story. Please get someone to help you with spelling and correct word use and placement.

Thanks for summarizing the story. You know, at the end of the fucking story, a reader might suddenly realize they don't remember what they've just read. What a wonderful idea you have: RECAP A STORY WE'VE JUST READ. Are you, in some retarded way, attempting to share the attention the author earned by writing his story? By RECAPPING it? In what amounts to a LitErotica version of a 10 second sound byte? When was the last time you actually SAW your penis without needing to use a mirror or a magnifying glass? How empty is your life that you have to resort to stunts like this to draw attention to yourself. Fucktard.

I agree with epiphany_jones. It was too much it made for a HUGE turn off. The mother-in-law scene made my stomach turn also. No exaggeration it was really disgusting & unfortunately too descriptive. I gave you 1*

A pretty good read. Maybe not your best, but still enjoyable.

Warren

It all started the summer I came back from Vietnam I was 22 at the time and Grandma was in her late seventies I needed a place to stay as Mom and Dad had both passed away grandma made by herself and said I could move in with her I must say Grandma was a good-looking woman for someone her age one hot summer night the air conditioner had broke down and it was hot I went into Grandmom's bedroom to tell her something and to my surprise she was laying there on the bed with nothing on she tried to cover up but I told her it was okay I have seen women with nothing on before she said I am your grandmother and you shouldn't see me I'm dressed I told her he looked pretty good nude she still has some nice tits and nipples and I was surprised at the amount of pussy hair she still had I went over and sat down on the side of the bed and moved her hands so I can get a better look at her tits her nipples we're just the right size and shape for her tits I reached over and started to feel them grand mom was trying to stop me saying no don't do that I am your grandmother but as I played with her nipples she let me play with them I could feel them starting to get hard she was saying no but was not trying to stop me I leaned over and began sucking on them soon they were hard as a rock as I suck on them I ran a hand down between her legs feeling her pussy hair as I did At first she kept her legs together but the more I rubbed her the more she started opening her legs soon she had her legs spread wide enough I could feel her clit and began rubbing it as I did Grandma started moaning soon I found her getting wet to my surprise and I could feel her whole soon I had to tip of my finger in her to my surprise she was very tight as I slid my finger in and out of her with each stroke it went in deeper though I couldn't believe I was fingering my own grandmother the more I fingered her the more she moans well as soon as I got my pants and underwear off am I showing grandma what I had for her she said we should not do this as I am your grandmother and she hadn't had sex in a long time and it might hurt well I spread her legs wide and lifted them up in the air some giving me a good look at her pussy at first I can only get the head of my cock in her she was so tight but the more I tried the whether she got soon that hole was opening up and me for long I was all the way in her she was starting to cry and telling me it hurt but she wasn't trying to stop me before long she started telling me it was feeling good to go faster and harder as I did she started moaning and groaning louder telling me she was going to come she let out a loud yell and wraps her legs around me and squeeze me real tight and she got real wet I couldn't believe I have given my grandmother in her 70s an orgasm I haven't shot my load yet but she was asking me to stop that it now hurt I asked if I could have her in the ass then she said no she had never allowed that so I asked her if she had her teeth out and she says yes why I said I wanted her to suck my cock she said she hadn't done that since she was a teenage girl but that she was good at it I had her get down on her knees in front of me and took her by the back of the head with one hand and put my cock in her mouth I didn't have to tell her what to do I could tell she had never forgot how to suck on it wasn't long before I shot my load as I did Grandma swallowed every bit of it and told me she had forgotten how good it could taste after that Grandma Mom and me had sex quite often I even taught grandma how to take it in the ass she got to wear she enjoyed that too we continued having sex till she was 87 and I had her 3 days before she died

killed the story 1 star