All Comments on 'Mom's Roommate'

I’m so fucking hard reading this.

Long, but very exciting. Well written and wrote by someone with cosiderable experience.Great details.

If there was a 10 star I would give it 11 GREAT STORY. Would read more and more of it.

Ugly narcissistic women characters, lame story, and a really screwed up writer apparently.

This is your best story to date, loved the love ride scene

Wow, what an ugly woman and a selfish heart.

Not as big fan of cuckold stories, except where the Dad and/or husband is an ass. But this one, about a service member who was injured and the wife immediately got mad because he was injured and went after the son like a 2 bit high school whore was over the top. Didn't make it through page 2. 1 star because there's nothing lower.

So many idiotic comments. You guys are on this website talking about morals, disgust and whatnot. The military and its soldiers? Who cares? You clicked on this story with an expectation of what it would be about, but still read it anyway. What a bunch of moronic clowns. There are plenty of other loving/vanilla smut stories on this website. Go read those.

I agree with Gadf77. Although it reminds very much of my ex-wife. The moment I had a major back injury through work, she hooked up with my best mate.

This story was insanely hot!! Don't understand why this apparently fictional story has riled up so many reader.

I read a couple of chapters but stopped as I found it getting a bit unbelievable. Why would a seemingly loving wife Cuckold her husband the minute he gets paralyzed ? I'd understand if it was after a couple of years and she was sexually frustrated but not straight away. This needs re-writing tbh.

Not believable at all. Not that it couldn’t happen but her careless activity loud activity just wouldn’t happen. Leave Vets out of bad writing.

There were definitely some sexy situations but the entire story is just awful on a moral standpoint. A father who is in the military goes away on a mission, gets injured in the line of duty and his wife cucks him with her son because she feels betrayed? His MIL kind of encourages this behaviour and then his sister finds out about his son fucking his wife, lies about it to him and suggests to his wife that she also wants some of what she's getting? And then you reveal some kind of incest/cuckold kink in the Father? In the cosmic sense he's kind of getting the shit end of the stick. And the daughter is getting totally ignored, she's going to need a lot of therapy later on in life.

Just stupid.

This was laughably bad. The mom is a bimbo whore that wants any cock in the room. That was apparent on page one. The son is some sex god with a massive penis that never goes soft and gives multiple orgasms. It honestly got worse after every page. I don’t think I’ve read a worse story and you made it a series.

Kristen is a fxcking bxtch. Watch the actual fxck. The moment after she tried having sex with her husband and he accused her of all that stuff (with proof), when she snaps at him even though she was in the wrong and caught red handed, i just became completely turned off to her character and this story at that point. Finished the story just because I wanted to see where it was going, hate her character, she is absolutely evil. Who would love a woman like that

"Metal_moon" - good observation - not one woman willing to do the right thing? Hope not. But unfortunately, women are basically self-absorbed down deep, their wants (disguised as "needs" in their thinking and chatting...) and their feelings and their excitement is more important than anyone else. They get it from all the inane women's magazine writers and the narcissistic writers running around sites like this pushing their "loose female dogs and no consequences" agenda.

Man, you are lame...

Takes a pretty ugly and twisted mind to come up with something like that. And at the root of it, probably a very ugly heart.

I've never felt so disgusted on this website before. this story should be removed or atleast tagged correctly so regular non evil people dont stumble across it.

Ah yes. Everyone women close to a man kicking him down when he is at his lowest.

Deeply flawed by atrocious grammar and a perverted sense of values.

What's lower than whale shit?

Oh yeah, Kristen and Garrett.

What am f'd up concept.

horrible little sister mam sleeping in sons room in sons bed with her own son yes not just sleeping son seducing his sexy very wllling mother making her cum and cum on his hard cock weeks of mam in her sons bed being loved by him

JT

Shit happens when you invade a country for no reason. Thats Karma. A Vet 73/ 76

Inane and ugly. What kind of a twisted heart would create a story like this. Must be written by another woman trying to promote the agenda for female dogs running around loose. Nothing more than that. Pretty reprehensible attitude, intentionally creating such a weak main character son. And intentionally making the husband such a fool. Hope Karma comes around to you.

The commenter below is extremely correct. This is disrespectful to people in our military, to people who have given of themselves and lost physical abilities, in service to others, and people who have lost abilities due to no fault of their own in any relationship. You have to be kind of sick in the head to intentionally disrespect people by writing this kind of thing. Probably more than mental sickness. This is all probably written by another self-absorbed anti-male woman who's trying to push a narcissistic female agenda - and herself driven by a twisted and evil heart. The writer needs to get help.

To 49wizard88 has nothing to do with sensitive you might think it is ok to disrespect the military the very people who defend our rights and the reason we even have them but I don't and I won't start its called showing respect and this isn't showing that respect like they have earned

To Mfkndragon, stop being so damn sensitive. This world isn't all unicorns and rainbows.

This story is disrespectful to anyone who was in or is in the military you should be ashamed of yourself for writing this and you should be banned from the site for the disrespect a persons fantasy says a lot about there character and the way there mind works yours says you have no respect for the military

This is just pathetic, sick trash.

I loved this story, the build up was awesome, there something about a woman that using words like cunt and cock that is to me an extreme turn on.

Keep up the good work, like I said I love your work

Just wrong on all levels

My favorite part was the worthless slut getting angry that her ill-used and mistreated husband suspected she was doing exactly what she was doing. My second favorite part was his worthless sister's and mother's betrayals. Third favorite was when the main worthless slut used his trauma to brainwash him into believing he enjoyed being cuckolded.

Can't wait to hear about the Aunt & Grandma getting fucked, too... It was a slow build up, but then it got good then stop.. Hopefully, the next part is just as good. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!

The wife is another bitch. She loves her husband, so much, that as soon as he's injured she's jumping into her son's bed. And his sister and her mother are no better. Poor bastard. He'd be better off dead.

What the fuck. Maybe put this in loving wives. Way to cuck a veteran. Stopped at page 3

Too Long.

Absolute selflessness on another level. And that's humanity, a soldier turned cuckold by his son, wife, and sister. Absolute wicked.

Love this. I only wish son was 20 and sis was 18 so she could sleep with dad. Feed dad her sweet virgin cream

The true ending; The next evening after supper, Doug pulled out his service revolver and shot his wife, daughter, son, and then himself. They were discovered three days later by the social worker sent by the VA.

Stopped at the end of page 3 - I can not recall such a selfish spouse in a Lit story than Kristen.

38 is not middle-aged thank you very much! 😡

Just come out & tell him. Didn’t he gjve e you enough to let you know he was OK with you two?

Doug is the most dense character I’ve ever read about here.

And Doug was too afraid to open the bathroom door. Everyone knows a small screwdriver will unlock a bathroom door.

Bill S.

Is the daughter Cassie or Carrie.

An editor usually helps with things like that

Not a bad story. A little disjointed. Parts missing, jumping from one scene to another w/o a break indicator. You need an editor to correct spellings and formatting.

Anony Mous

I LOVE that all these stories start off with reasonably believable wives, who switch to bacchanalian freaks a few paragraphs in. It's good fun.

Cassie was something if a Greek Chorus, observing, commenting, revealing g details.

And completely unconvincing. No. No. No.

No 6 year kniwad and says those things. No 6 year old goes off to the fair with “lots of money” alone with her friends.

Aww, man! Don’t I feel stupid? You DID write a sequel. I’m sorry for ragging on you.

That’s it?!? That’s the ending?!? Talk about leaving us hanging.

Otherwise, an awesome story. Good job, just maybe write a sequel.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work. Not a very nice wife.

Great scenario, although being an exserviceman it did not rather close to home. Well prepared and written but occasionally there are errors that the proofreading and editing have missed.

it was pretty good before the aunt was written in with the camera and all. and they went from playing around to full on intercourse with out any lead up to it. but it was still a good read.

It started out really good. But then some of your where do you said she was a bit ridiculous. This whole? Throbbing penis? Some of your terminology is pretty lame. And they went from kissing and masturbating together to full on fucking in the car. There needs to be a much slower transition that builds up to those moments. But you have potential as a writer

well putt together , except for the fact it was a little bit dragged out, sounded very credible, true to life. the ending war left unfinished regards peter

Regardless of all the negativity about the wounded veterans, it is after all FICTION.

It was a pleasure reading but for all the errors in both spelling and grammar. It would have been picked up by any spellchecker. Perhaps an editor could be of help.

In saying that it doesn't stop one enjoying it.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

Well, for the first time I've now found a story here that instead of turning me on just pissed me off. What a miserable, self centered, and entirely selfish individual this Kristen character was, and from the beginning, too. And the situations you set up were totally unrealistic. Thanks for making what I hoped would be a titillating night being ruined by this awful story.

Definitely one of the very best I've ever read , thanks .

I'm halfway through, just after the argument, and I'm not sure I can finish. Did the mom have to act like such an ass? Her shitty attitude toward her recently-handicapped "partner", even fictional, just turned me off. She's acting like a rebellious 18 year old: "I'm an adult, you can't tell me what to do." Well, if you're blatantly going to cheat just because you are able to, expect some consequences.

Please continue the series with new chapters

I love how the instant her husband's cock was out of the picture, she started making moves on her son. I can't wait till he breeds that dirty little slut of a mother!!

i dont want this to end

When is part 3 going to be published?

I was thinking if my mom as I read the story. She would cum soo hardwhileci was fucking her. Over and over and over she soaked my love stick with her nectar

This story is hot especially at lovers lane. This story needs to continue with more cuckold and more tit play.

Two words - shit hot

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Great buildup of the mom-son relationship to completely flop at the end. She teases him so long and leads up to... chopped up back seat quickie randomly told from the (previously unknown) high school teacher/private investigator aunt's perspective? (who also "loves" son and will hide their relationship provided unknown conditions are met)

Fuck Doug, he's nothing but a made up character that's getting cucked! You guys need to remember that this is just a fictional story, and just enjoy the hot mom and son incest. As long as you are not hurting a loved one behind their back in real life, you're good.

Anonymous you really missed a good story. Well rounded with serious, humor, love and a little heartbreak. You know like LIFE! I totally agree that on your way out the door move fast before it hits you. Also, for the other Anon I’m grown and couldn’t write this story. So, a adolescent surely couldn’t put this much thought into 1 story in such a fluid way. So instead of whinnying like “the sister, who is a child”, go read something you like better. It’s only like 100s of thousand stories on here. One made for everyone. So bye bye….

To the Writer: Excellent work and I’m glad it’s a part 2; can’t wait to read it.

I actually liked it. Hey other than the incest it’s quite funny 😄. Just kidding about the incest. But it is quite humorous in spite of “Doug’s” injury. Which is a pleasant surprise because I thought it would be much more serious. LOVE THE MOMS HUMOR!!!🤣 Keep it coming!

@anonymous Uh...

What happened to stand by your man. More concerned about her own needs

She should of left him than do what she done.

Wow, Anonyousy bailed at the description of the "mom" character. That was at the very beginning, so he missed out on a very well-thought-out enjoyable story. I hope the door didn't smack him too hard on his ass as he left. 5 stars. Is there a part 2?

Quit reading when I got to the elaborate physical description of the "mom" character. Just another adolescent fantasy MILF. Predictable and very boring which leads me to believe that the rest of the story will be predictable and very boring. So, why bother?

Doug is either going to be a cuckold or he has to fight to get his wife and hardon back so He can Man up and do his duty or end up leaving it to his young Son to Keep Mommy and Auntie Happy

Ummmm.... wow. Poor Doug?

Talking about a happy ending.

Still One of the hottest stories I have ever read, just even thinking about it is exciting.

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It's a wonderful read. There were mentions of her feet but it didn't take any active part in the story. The mom could have teased him or something like that to spice up the story.

feel like there are some jumps in storylines.

so Doug gets injured and all of a sudden Kristen is allover her son and seducing him? where does this come from? I felt like there was a missing build-up to her realization. and some other minor points.

anyways. I really liked your writing style... one moment its the aunt Misty's and then from Kristen/Garretts perspective. really well done...5*

I like the story, long but worth the wait. Maybe break into more chapters and please continue. I want to know how Doug's sister gets laid and if Doug watches his wife and son or maybe Doug does his sister in secret as he practices. However ..great story and i was definitely wet!

I liked this story. It may have been better broken into a few sections/chapter but that's a personal preference.

I liked the build up/teasing and the action was well done.

The part that bothered me was the 'cuckholding' of the father, Doug. Maybe that was part of the point of the story, but I didn't Kristen being such a bitch to him and basically ignoring him. I think I understand that she's a) pissed at him and b) someone who just needs lots of sex.

When I first started reading I was Hoping for a love story... What I got was a story of a Slut that since her Husband "lied" to her and got hurt defending his country Literally Ran to the next available man her son. And then upon finding her husband not functioning she seduces her son for his Cock... that's not LOVE. and throwing the Aunt in as a naughty teacher slut just reduces the love more.

should have not had the father and sister in it at all they still could have become room mates from other scenarios.

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love. Masterfully crafted story that I could not stop reading.

Alwaystaboo

Such a great building up.. brilliant potrayed teasing and sexual tension.. AND THEN YOU FUCKED UP THE MAIN SEX SCENE BY DESCRIBING IT THROUGH THE PERSPECTIVE OF A THIRD PARTY!!

Zero stars for this amazingly started and turned out to be shit-hole of a story!

One of the best stories I have ever read, it was perfect in every way and nothing bad can be said about it...

Look Im not a vet but i know many. It's a story. The fact that he is now immobilized and stuff I feel like it went with the story. That being said I just dont see why you guys are angry. If you want realism take a look at how many guys are left when theyre in the military, or cheated on (goes both ways men and women both) because your partner didnt wamt to wait for you or they decided to sleep with someone else. Thats REAL LIFE. Its a hot story and it went with it. I dont think the author meant any offense to those in the military or vets. WE STILL LOVE YOU GUYS!!!

You wrote a sexy and erotica story, but I had to stop reading due to the utter disrespect of the wounded combat vet.

People need to remember this site is meant for erotic stories, not political or social debate. Go to YouTube if that's what you're looking for. So in this fictional, erotic story, one of the military characters gets shit on.... really hard. So what? Fuck Doug. Why? Because he's not real and his punk ass character fits well into the story. He's supposed to be weak and helpless and how he became that way, whether it speaks to the author's personal beliefs or not, is completely irrelevant to me other than to further the story. Maybe the author is a leftist fascist. I couldn't care less. I'm here to write and read and enjoy erotic fiction, not judge people on there personal beliefs. Grow up folks.

P.S. Check out my stories when you get a chance.

Holy shit she is an amazing tease. She does the most obvious flirting ever and then plays dumb like she's an air head. The teasing was so good that she practically turned him into a mother-con. Need more with the son taking the lead though. She does all the build up on her own, but it would be awesome if he had one time where he just completely dominates her the entire time.

I see people are hating the story with how they treated the dad since he is a vet. Honestly she is shallow as fuck for actually being angry at him for it in reality. And the selfishness she showed by only thinking of her own happiness would make me want to rip her head off in real life. BUT! In fiction, someone has to take the fall for the mother-son thing to work out. I look at it as him being a sacrifice for the story. I feel for him but meh.

This story was disgusting in how it treats a wounded vet. I stopped after reading how the mother in law treated Doug on page 2 or 3. I'm shocked I made it that far, given how distasteful and disrespectful this shit was. Easy 1 star.

Awful mom. Even worse wife.

But a genuinely great slut.

And, at the end of the day, that's all it really matters here... right?

That was one of the best stories that I have read on Literotica. It was well-written and it turned me on. It was a real pleasure to read a story with seduction in it, taking its time, building anticipation, as it moves towards hot sex. I also appreciated a writer with a talent for good dialogue and skills in grammar and spelling. Sadly, all of the above characteristics are missing from most stories on Literotica. It seems like everybody wants to go straight to the fucking - so boring.

As for the comments from veterans, I get how the story affects some of them. But as a fellow veteran with a very long and satisfying 36 year career behind me, all in the Infantry, I took the story for what it simply was, erotic entertainment. I suspect no mean spirited ulterior motives behind your characterization of her sexually dysfunctional husband. In fact, you put a positive spin on the end of the story as his guilty arousal holds out hope for future erections/sex. That exchange between husband and wife, especially as he offered his oral talents, is very relatable because I struggle with the same issue. And as for his wife, she is a VERY lustful and seductive woman who craves good cock, as most women do. Granted, her reaction to him is rude and heartless, but her frustration is understandable, especially given her sky high libido and cock-driven selfishness. Still, I wanted to fuck her sooo bad! She is a smokin' hot sexualized woman. That's a huge credit to your story, building my own lust ever higher, with a character that I just wanted to wear out day and night (Ha! If I still could, anyway).

I'm also a grad student, working on an MA in English/Creative Writing, so I am always attentive to a writer's ability to evoke emotions in readers. These comments that you've received reflect a wide range, and that variety of reactions is a good thing.

Please keep posting. I've added you, as an author, as an author, to my favorites list, and this fine story, also.

Thanks!

Loved this one.

People up in arms are just butthurt because you don't suck veteran dick like the rest of america. They can't stand to find someone who thinks even the tiniest bit different from what they do, so just ignore butthurt normies.

I hope you weren't there in 1969 When soldiers came home from war, is was not fiction nor was the Spitting and name calling: "BABY KILLERS", "MURDERS" it was not pretty. It seemed the only people happy to see us come back were family, if they were still alive. We didn't just go fight a war we left our lives, loves and families. If anyone wrote to us we sometimes were informed that we lost loved ones at home or in war. Nobody seems to remember most of us had just got out high school. (18th birthday register for the draft) (the lottery) We didn't volunteer we were drafted forced, told, to go. They didn't care if you were in college either. If you were rich and got a deferment you did have to go but, If you were rich and didn't get a deferment you ran to Canada. Yes this is fiction but, there is always truth in there some where about the way "YOU" feel. You can write very well I can respect that but, your subject does not fit well with me. I'm not going to comment anymore. I will read the next section and hope for a different outcome.

Being a Vietnam Vet myself I didn't take to kindly to this story at all. 1 star only.