All Comments on 'Monolith Ch. 01'

A delightful story. Written very well, nicely paced, good descriptions (especially of Monolith), and a great build up to an erotic finish! I am looking forward to more.

Not a bad story. Two things I noticed:

"Though I bring in less people..." should be "Though I bring in fewer people..."

"The beast takes it's time..." should be "The beast takes its time..."

I loved how you described Adara dancing, so sexy.

Author, you are so very creative!!! Reading this gave me such a sense beauty and comfort

Indeed, the beast is inside us all.

Very good could do with more episodes of Monolith's sexual exploits, probably Ladies from the Audience involved.