All Comments on 'Moral Climate Ch. 05'

Really got into this story. except for Momma being a Bitch everything would have worked out.

gentle read

What is it Bev/Beverly or Beth/Elizabeth?

Thank you all for taking the time to comment. One (short) chapter to go. I submitted all the chapters a day at a time but have no control of when they get posted. I do prefer a single submission but this story would have been quite long. Hope everyone stays for the ending.

With respect

DG Hear

how did i not read the husband is dead line? i remember the hand holding and squeezing but not the dead line. ok tina is not a cheating slut. it is getting better knowing that. i went back and re-read everything - SO YOU ARE RIGHT, I AM WRONG - SORRY DG.

or the sands to reverse. TK U MLJ LV NV

to bad he wasted all the years living the single life when he could have had his love except for the bitch mothers interfearence. now i hope he gets his women and lives a happy life from then on.

I have to admit that it is nice romantic story now. It could have easily taken off for outer space... One thing that struck me was that some people might even get upset about their sex out of wedlock, but I guess that is a memory from sixty years ago. Another detail, I find improbable that fine teen age noses wouldn't have smelled sex in their room, but since that was the whole idea behind putting them in the same room none of the girls are going to comment about it....

keep tina to fuck but no way should he have kids with tina till he has kids with another woman...who woule everr raise another mans brats ...fuck the mother yes but find a nice young lady and have a cpl kids of your own first then maybe later you can also move tina in with you and your wife n kids when hers are out of the house

You write a very nice true love story, i've enjoyed each chapter.

Personnally I would like more sexual description,

But not in this story. It's good the way it is.

"She picked out a large crystal heart with an angel on each side"

Yuk!

Why didnt he use protection when he and Tina were at the park,what if she gets pregnant?.

Tina and Jeff did NOT use protection? Could there be a baby ACCIDENT in the works? It was fun to see the dilemma about who would sleep where at the hotel. It sure sounded like Tina's daughters were manipulating the situation to get their mother in Jeff's bed!!!

Is the name of Tina's daughter Bev or Beth?

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BJ

Bev or Beth? Pick a name and stick with it!