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Click hereThere was a knock at the door. "Mom, Jeff, are you awake?" It was Sue.
"Come on in Sue." She came in and asked what we were going to do. I told her Tina was in the shower and that she should wake the other girls and we all needed to get ready to leave.
It would be an hour before everyone showered and packed their things. We then would go to the buffet and have breakfast. Other than getting a bite for lunch it would be five hours after we left the park before we ate again and it would be at the Red Lobster for Tina's birthday.
When Tina came out of the bathroom she told me we almost got caught. "Yeah", I said. "But you have to admit it was fun."
"You're bad, do you know that. You had sex with my daughters' mother and they were in the next room." She couldn't help but smile.
Before leaving the park we went to the souvenir store. I told Tina to pick out whatever she wanted for her birthday. She picked out a large crystal heart with an angel on each side to place on her mantle over the fireplace.
We stopped at the Red Lobster and had a good meal for her birthday. All the girls had shrimp. Angie and Barb thanked me a dozen times for inviting them along. They were some good kids.
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End of chapter five, one chapter left to go
Comments are welcome and appreciated
DG Hear
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoTina and Jeff did NOT use protection? Could there be a baby ACCIDENT in the works? It was fun to see the dilemma about who would sleep where at the hotel. It sure sounded like Tina's daughters were manipulating the situation to get their mother in Jeff's bed!!!
Is the name of Tina's daughter Bev or Beth?
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BJ
Anonymousover 4 years agoWhy didnt he use protection when he and Tina were at the park,what if she gets pregnant?.
Anonymousabout 7 years ago"She picked out a large crystal heart with an angel on each side"
Yuk!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoYou write a very nice true love story, i've enjoyed each chapter.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agokeep tina to fuck but no way should he have kids with tina till he has kids with another woman...who woule everr raise another mans brats ...fuck the mother yes but find a nice young lady and have a cpl kids of your own first then maybe later you can also move tina in with you and your wife n kids when hers are out of the house
bruce22almost 12 years agoI have to admit that it is nice romantic story now. It could have easily taken off for outer space... One thing that struck me was that some people might even get upset about their sex out of wedlock, but I guess that is a memory from sixty years ago. Another detail, I find improbable that fine teen age noses wouldn't have smelled sex in their room, but since that was the whole idea behind putting them in the same room none of the girls are going to comment about it....
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoto bad he wasted all the years living the single life when he could have had his love except for the bitch mothers interfearence. now i hope he gets his women and lives a happy life from then on.
tazz317almost 12 years agoor the sands to reverse. TK U MLJ LV NV
cantbuymyalmost 12 years agohow did i not read the husband is dead line? i remember the hand holding and squeezing but not the dead line. ok tina is not a cheating slut. it is getting better knowing that. i went back and re-read everything - SO YOU ARE RIGHT, I AM WRONG - SORRY DG.
DG Hearalmost 12 years agoAuthorThank you all for taking the time to comment. One (short) chapter to go. I submitted all the chapters a day at a time but have no control of when they get posted. I do prefer a single submission but this story would have been quite long. Hope everyone stays for the ending.
With respect
DG Hear
