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Did you proofread this at all? It was loaded with mistakes, enough to make it less erotic than it might otherwise have been.

First, John is the best friend, new love. Jason is from the paper they's working on, regarding the story Jason and the Golden Fleece.

Second, the story was proof-read, and multi-edited via 3 different editing programs I have. After all that, I only found one mistake, where there was "Ii" instead of "I"