All Comments on 'More Than A Passport Photo'

No real sense of boundaries being approached, never mind pushed. No real sense of Jill having any internal doubts about what's going on. No emotion really. I've been generous. 2½ if the site allowed half-stars.

When you don't finish stories, the lust an wonder does not carry to 5 minutes later, much less days later when the story is finished and posted.

1 star. Finish the story.

I have to agree with some of the previous comments. This story was like having unemotional sex with someone, and then having them get up in the middle of it to make a sandwich. Just unsatisfying all the way around.

There is no emotional context to why this woman is allowing herself to be slowly photographed more and more naked. And then we reach the part where things might escalate, and we get "the end".