All Comments on 'More Than Cosmetic'

You're a great writer. I certainly hope to see more!

Nice! Need I say more? An excellent short story so I guess short and to the point it will remain. Unless . . .

that was great, i liked the build up and the fact that she's not the only one it's happening to

more, more, more. You really cannot end it there. This is a great platform for a whole raft of great stories. The nurse could have gone into the room to check on the new patient, she could go to the dayroom to meet up with a load of other recently treated patients....the possibilities are endless.