All Comments on 'More Than I Ever Wanted? Ch. 01'

by JamesTDH

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Ahhhh

FINISH THE STORY! It started out amazingly

freemic3040freemic3040over 14 years ago
Please...

Please write more to this story!! I loved the open to this story, but when you put ch.1, that means that there is gonna be at least a ch.2. The first chapter was short (but great) and I can't wait to read chapter 2. PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE TO THIS STORY!!!!

belted and teasedbelted and teasedabout 16 years ago
Excellent beginning--a tease like your story!

A good beginning, leaving me looking forward to what cums next (or not), trying to ignore MY erection. I love a good, desperate tease...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
short

good start, although rather short.. I hope the next chapter is a little longer.. Keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Definite improvement

You can tell by my score

submissiveMansubmissiveManabout 16 years ago
Good beginning

good start

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