All Comments on 'Mother's Helping Hand Ch. 04'

If I was Bobby, I would have been looking for tell-tale signs of Mom's nipples hardening as she jerked me off the second time. I suspect you avoided any mention of nipples to tease the reader. The big question is, did it turn her on or was she simply doing her best for her son? Maybe we'll find out in chapter 5. Keep them coming. Note how I avoided the obvious pun.

....now faster please!!!! BJs next. Or whatever. Just move it along.

I really like it that the mom has stopped complaining and is clearly enjoying it. Please keep this story going. I can't wait to see what happens next, as long as she doesn't start complaining again. Then I'm probably out.

Nice progression. Good pacing on this one.... not as slow moving. Yeah, is mom enjoying herself? Thrilled at the idea of turning on a younger guy?

Keep it slow! I like your story for being more realistic and not rushed

good story, feel free to wait a little longer if you can add an extra page or two :)

I am enjoying the hell out of this. Keep the pace like you're doing, don't have them fuck in the next chapter or two, have them progress bit by bit, having her giving him a blow-job, letting him feel her tits during the hand-jobs, kissing him, etc. Lots of ways to progress the story and sexual tension without having them fuck right away.

You're doing just great, keep them wanting more and mom wanting his touch n the next chapter...

The only problem in your story is it's too short. I want more and more so please, continue writting.

Can't wait for the next chapter, you've done great for your very first series. I am eager to see what more you come up with.

as Bobby's mom does to him in this excellent story. It's such a sweet motherly thing to do. And it is just so cool that his mother Allison's helping hand gets her young son to blow his balls all over the place. At his age Bobby's got plenty of semen, lots and lots of it, that he's got to shoot all the time. The subtitle to this terrific series says "Will Alison continue to relieve Bobby's hard ons?" We all she sure will. And you know what? She's got a place right between her legs that's ideal for the job. It's the same wonderful hairy hole that Bobby came out of. It's a perfect fit for the kid's hard on and it's capacious enough for all the sperm he keeps churning out. Come on, gifted author. Get the boy's cock up his own mother's cunt where it belongs. We're waiting with bated breath.

This is turning into one of the best series I have read on here. The two characters are likeable and believable enough to keep me coming back and the pace is perfect. Keep it slow and steady, don't start to race to get to the finish and build the heat up gradually between the two until they finally cross every boundary and become not just lovers but entwined together for life. This has the real chance of becoming an amazing story of true love so please don't let us down; give it your all and let them give each other their all!

Another fantastic instalment. The pace is perfect and the detail of the handjobs is incredible. The mother sounds so damn beautiful and sexy too. Looking forward to the next chapter already.

Yes, cannot wait until the next chapter !! I think his Mom knows just what she is doing and enjoys it. Since she has admitted to Bobby his cock is bigger than his Dad's was; they need to go to the next level.

His Mom in thinking things over and now being naked except for her panties; wants to screw him and feel his hot cum splash inside. He can do it 3 or 4 times a day; will be more joy to them both. Thank you ...........

more than on orgasm from reading it.

Dear all!

Thanks for all the comments, positive, negative and in between.

I was pretty nervous when I posted the first chapter as to how it would be received. Needless to say I've been encouraged greatly by your feedback.

Just to clarify this is a work of fiction and not autobiographical, I'm not condoning incest in real life as this is all just fantasy. I have another 5-6 chapters lined up for Bobby and Alison, after that any ideas you horny little perverts have for future ideas are welcome .

Yours fondly

Dick Le Spank

"after that any ideas you horny little perverts have for future ideas are welcome."

Any chance of Mom getting pregnant? And both of them fucking through to the 3rd trimester? Mom still doin' it super-reluctantly of course. Lol.

Hey, you asked.

Pls keep 'em coming.

Very exciting story. Hope the son would find his mom's dirty panties upstairs and will get caught red handed As he is pressing the crotch to his nose and sniffing hard on his mom's musky erotic pussy scent. The mom mockingly scolded him but smiling and telling him like father like son as his dad likes sniffing panties too. Then pinched him on his rib and wrinkled her nose to him as if saying it is musky, and that he is so naughty. Then they both laugh about it.

Thanks for sharing.

Way better than the numerous crap posted on Literotica.

Lovecraft, Beachbum and Standingstones, eat your heart out!

Eroticism instead porn.

Read each of the chapters it's getting old yes I get he still has a broken wrist but just handjobs get on to the bj' sand the sex this handjob shit is hurting the story i rated each one a 1 star hoping for more but you disappoint

Great story can't wait for the next one hope its here soon

The "Sucks" comment by anonymous is written as badly as he says this story is written.

The 'Sucks' comment is by far the stupidest thing ive read in a while. Totally ignore anything like that because they are way off the mark.

I can honestly say that the description of the hand jobs in this chapter were far hotter than 90% of the descriptions of intercourse in other stories on here.

Personally id be quite happy if things only went as far as handjobs and tit fucking between Bobby and his mother!

Getting bored waiting.

Please post 5, 6, 7, etc, ASAP.

The fans have spoken so move it !

http://www.literotica.com/s/northern-light

But you've got lots of potential to be the Better.

I am hoping for at least 4 more chapters.

superb , erotic series . I am looking forward to MUCH more ! Thanks

1. Cum does NOT come from a guys balls. It's not produced or stored in them. Sperm is made in the testes, and stored in the Epidimus. Sperm accounts for something like 1% of the contents of cum.

2. Cum does not ruin clothing. Throw it in the washer or rinse it out in the sink, and it's fine.

This is not a story about biology or dry cleaning, it is about incest FANTASY, and if a few plot devices and some artistic licence really bother you that much... don't read it!

Looking good - very good pacing kept me moving forward in the story - bits at a time.

As predictable as always. Mom will bring back her concience. This is the same dumb bitch who told her 18 year old son that if they were found out be could be placed in foster care. This is supposed to be an educated woman.

Note: 18 year olds are kicked out of foster care, not admitted.

WOW thanks for the nut bro 100% HOT

You don't mention the colour of her panties though

Extremely erotic

Loving this series :)

I wondered how he ate the pizza