All Comments on 'Mountain Magic Revisted'

This is one fantastic story. I'm glad that you decided to continue it. I hope you will post more chapters.

Great story, I really enjoy your work.

Keep it up! I can never seem to take myself away from your stories.

I would love it if there was another story, maybe about their wedding. :)

I love this story and wish I could find love like they did. I hope you keep writing more stories like this.

I ran across the first story just popping around the site and thought to myself boy it would be great if there was a follow up to this. Well I must say you hit it out of the part with this one..

I can only hope that the series will continue with perhaps a little bit of Cat's recovery and getting back on her feet as well as the new gallery and perhaps a wedding...

well thought, very emotional near the end. but you left it with a cliff hanger.

the story is quite simply amazing. i would dearly love to see more written about those two

I can't express how moved I was by this story. Beautiful. I loved it, thank you.

Only one other story made me cry on this site, and that one ended tragically. thank you for ending it in such a nice way, very emotional but amazing. Loved both parts.

I'm only allowed 5 stars otherwise I'd give more. A great story and wonderfully told.

I really enjoyed this, and yes the sex was hot! I gotta say though, the part after Cat was hit by the car and she was dying? That was absolutely beautifully written! ~ L

as reading the story i somehow enchanted by that "mountain magic" the connection,loves intensity,and life..it`s just good that we have a pliable heart that can withstand the happiness and bad blows.....to the writer thank you. for you don`t just do an excellent story,you also makes your readers feel the LOVE even without having special somone.~cinder

What a truly beautiful story. Captured me instantly & wouldn't let me go until there was nothing left to read.

Loved the characters & you depicted the emotion so wonderfully - incredibly moving!

I know I'll come back to these stories again & again.

Cat xx

i love every bit of ALL your stories! you should write more!!

Really enjoyed these two episodes,romantic,character driven,erotic but not overdone,great stuff,keep up the good work

More! Please more!! This is a wonderful story, I'd hate to see it end

Excellent! You should keep going with this if you can. It'd be great to hear more about Cat's recovery and the couple rebuilding after the fire. You've done a great job of building the readers attachment to this couple.

moreeeeeeeee pleeeaaassseeeeeee..........

Awesome story! it has a heart stopping , brilliant and entertaining angle where all the words simply flow into and compliment each other creating a vivid and powerful storyline of love, mystery, thriller and suspense rolled into one. I LOVED IT

I loved the build up and the what a story line well done please write more

and keep the story alive

Loved it.

I read the first one, and this one and I shed tears!

5 stars -- hands down!

It was a great way to actually "revisit" Mountain Magic by hearing the story again in Cats mind. I actually thought Cat was going to die, then I thought to myself that would be so sad and I would be heartbroken for the next week over some story I read!

Anyways, the only thing that would have made this any better would be if Cat and Jesse got to bitch the shit out of Kate, but at least she's going to jail!!!

Anyways, <3'd the story, WRITE MORE!!!!

I loved reading this story. You had brought the charters to life. The added drama only made the story feel so real. I truly hope to read more of your works soon. Please write more loving stories.

I fell in love with these characters within the first few chapters of part one. I was ready to write words of anger if you had Cat die, but you saved the day and the story. Beautiful job on the whole story. You have a very beautiful way of writing. I'm anxiously waiting to read more from you.

Magnificent. I love these two girls. So....what happens next?

Great story.

Has this story been made into a book?

I remember reading a book similar to this story, but I can't remember the title or the author of that book.

Great witing

That was just absolutely beautiful it is now one of my favs omg wow I simply loved both cat and Jesse! But that Kate I wanted to jump through the screen and RUN HER OVER LOL but really thanks for writing

Absolutely a great story. Once I started reading I couldn't stop. Very well done. Would love to see it continued.

I have read this several times and it never fails to make me cry. Well done.

What a beautiful story! I swear the tears wouldn't stop falling. I love a story that's full of love and trust. Bravo.

If you're still reading these comments, Virginia, have you stopped writing? Because your stories are good enough for your readers to want more.

Together the 'Magic Mountain' stories are excellent although I didn't much like the rough sex between Cat and Jesse in the second chapter---it seemed to be totally out of character for the two women from the first chapter. Still, I'm sure that some other readers might well disagree with me. But whatever, your stories are first-rate---come back, please.

amazing thank you so much , if you are still visiting here thank you so very much for this lovely work of art . i hope your life is filled with love .i wish you all the best.

This chapter is just as wonderful as the first one. Made me cry. I love a good love story.

This is the second time I've read this story and it is one of my favorites. I also have read all of your other stories and they are just as great. I love the way you write your stories with such great details I can see everything as if I was there...wish you would write more stories!!!!!!

This is my third time reading this story, making me cry through your ending, once again. I do love happy endings as this one was. My only wish is that you may once more grace us with more of your stories. I love the way you bring out the characters, making them feel we know them personally. Thank you.

This rollercoaster of a sequel turned me upside down before the lovely ending. Thank you for a wonderful read!

Mxxx

One word.. Incredible. Had this on 'will read sometime' for so long and today I thought why not. Wish I had read it sooner now. One of the best. Perfect writing, story and everything else in between. Just a perfect story in every way.

wonderful story, it has all and well written, brilliant and fun

thank you

Unusually I find myself disagreeing with Maonaigh. The sex is probably the best part of this chapter. The rough sex is role play, with emphasis on the play, between a loving couple. It is just one style of their love making, and we see another in the tender sixty-nine later in the chapter.

Every love isa winner ..... They have been tested harshly and even the doorstep to the heaven was not enough to leave the soulmate behind ...... But yeah a natural coma isn't something funny and it will leave you upside down or inside out ...... Its a bloody fight back into living a life ...... So this was a very emotional dramatic tale and the happy end was perfect

Wow!

Dramatic climax!

Omg, after I finished the first story, it was a total bonus, to realise that you'd written a follow up. It really was such an amazing read, the characters were brilliant and th story... Well wow! I loved it :) ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐