All Comments on 'Mr. Lewis Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Please don't make us wait almost 2 months again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Way with words...

You are doing an awesome job. This chapter was just as great as the first. More more more.

BTW: I'm guessing she is preggers, right?

ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

Danica need to be realistic. They both could get into so much trouble if they are caught, Ryan much more than her.

They can't have too much of a relationship in secret. Danica need to cut Ryan a break.

I hope she isn't knocked up, that would be awful right now.

Giggles4uGiggles4uover 10 years ago
Dear Lord....

She's pregnant!!! All hell is about to break lose when they get her to the hospital!

Then again, I could be completely wrong on that.... Ugh the suspense!!! Lol

Love it!!!

MADISONKAIMADISONKAIover 10 years ago
Glad to see the update! 5

Can we say "DRAMA!" Loving it. Can't wait to see how this plays out. They can hide a relationship but a pregnancy is a whole other thing...lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
How I Honestly Feel About This Story

This story kicks sooooooooo much ass! Riveting, edge of your seat, sweet, intense, etc.... Keep up the excellent work!

bensyayabensyayaover 10 years ago
Loved it!

I'm glad you continued this story, it's definitely spicey. I just hope she is not pregnant, that would be so cliche. Virgin gets pregnant her first time. I hope she is just sick. OAN I love the pace of the story and I like the characters. Love to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Why?

She's upset but she knew that was going to happen and she was prepared for it. SO why did she get all surprised about it when he told her. Come on! If anyone knew, he would go to jail and have a record. It's selfish of her to want to continue now. Just wait a couple of months.

LilMissQueenBLilMissQueenBover 10 years ago
YAY

OMG Your a fab writer just put you up for the clitorides awards for best romantic story and best author you Amazing :) loved this part cant wait to go on and read the next part always five out of five from me

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