All Comments on 'Mrs. Hart's Ache Ch. 18'

Love the Storyline. Not sure why you stopped just as you were getting to the Interesting part where Mother and Possibly Daughter would learn about each Other. And possibly Dad find out about Wife and/or Wife Find out about Husband and His lack of Interest. in his Wife. and James Possibly telling Mrs.Harte Bye-Bye. and Causing her to go Crazy with Want.

I've read and enjoyed the story so far - but it needs to be finished - there are so many possibilities. Please don't just leave it there.

Absolutely a wonderful story. Great characters and an interesting storyline. My only complaint is that you stopped writing before finishing.

Your novel is very hot and intense. Where you left off means the reader will miss the intensity and the buildup to more wonderful scenes between JMM and Veronica.

All the possible missing scenes: her bikini striptease, the public introduction of Veronica as James's slave, her hopefully evolution as a character and a woman, the relationship between master and slave, etc.

It leave the reader panting for more. Whether you did this deliberately or whatever the case may be, I do hope that you find your muse again and finish this novel.

If not, all I can say it's a wonderful story.

OK you asked for feed back and then you don't finish the story you suck big time

Great story I hope you finish it and not leave us hanging like so many others on here

Great Story need finishing