by sheFloats
I gave your story to my girl -- because she wants to get comfortable flirting with women. Great descriptions.
This was a wonderfully-written and very erotic story. I look forward to reading more from you. Your bio says you're interested in BDSM, so would enjoy seeing you incorporate that into your future stories.
This is a very well-written and erotic story. Your bio says you're interested in BDSM; I look forward to you adding this element to your future stories.
Thanks for all the comments, suggestions, and support. I'm currently working on part 2 of the series; it does include some light BDSM. Hope that everyone keeps reading!
Great writing and a sexy story, even though lesbian stories are my thing.