All Comments on 'Ms. Puckett’s Very Private School: Cindy'

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marklionmarklionover 14 years ago
Nice First Chapter!!!

That was a nice first chapter that you wrote about Cindy and how she got the new job as a teacher for young men. I like how she was able to help Bobby become a better lover for his women. She was able to teach him how to satisfy his women in the future. I like how you wrote the sequence of him playing with her breasts and becoming more oral with her. I can hardly wait for the next chapter to see how the story continues.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good start

Excellent! By tying this in with a school (plus a group of mature women) I can see many chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent

Excellent story. very well written

cryforhelpcryforhelpover 14 years ago
very nice theme

I absolutely loved this, the mature woman guiding the young man and loving it herself. This storyline is really awesome, I hope you keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
HOT

Nice story, made me so hot!

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