by frog7
This strory was nothing more than a guy who forced himself on some woman.
How come you did'nt at least come up with his own language;Sure she would'nt understand him but he could have spoken inside her mind useing human words.
You could have done so much it it (he had red scales and purple sperm) Yeah he's not human, DUH
Keep trying and only good things come when you really put in the work.
And not really in a good way. The ending is way too rushed, as well.