All Comments on 'My Awakening'

Awesome story!

Is this really your first story, keep on with more like it

just like my imagination.

f'n great!

one of the most erotic stories I have read in a while. I get hard every time I think about it

good writing, except for two points

- the suspense-who-got-the-cum thing got old after the second time

- the ending kind of put an anti-climax to the story. you don't want that in a sex tale ;)

That was great! Look forward to reading more of your work : )

Totally awesome, even thinking about it just gets me wet!!

That was simply the hottest story I have ever read! Keep 'em coming!

Fucking hot stroking action while wanton whore Amy describes lustfully, her and Janie thirstyly drinking multiple loads as ropes of hot jizz shoot and splash them from all directions, creating a splooge painting on both there faces, dripping off there there wagging tongues, over there pouting lips onto rock hard nipples, they kiss and mix the cum up in there mouths. Cocks penetrate the bitches cum holes from all directions, cum over and over, while they enjoy being gangbang cumbuckets.

All this told in first 2 and half pages or so. Then it gets repetive. Same descriptions over and over... just added a few more girls.

But as I say first 2 pages cum worthy. :)