All Comments on 'My Beginning!'

A great piece and very easy to see it is from reality. Very well crafted. Where is that voyeur cam when I need it?

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Well told, I like a story with substance and this has plenty. Thank you.

brilliant first story. so true to life.

and so very erotic,. nothing better than two women making each other cum. hope there's a second part of this real fantastic story .

Even though this started out so sad, I really liked it. This drew me in because it was so realistic. And then the beautiful part towards the end make me both happy and horny! What a great story! Linda