All Comments on 'My Black Coworker Ch. 02'

by penasweapon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
crap

badly written CRAP

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I so dislied the characters that 00

is the only vote possible. The wife has is a black cum slut and should leave the husband so he can find someone else who cares and might even try to stay faithfull. Just untill the divorce come through.

RmblnMnRmblnMnover 15 years ago
Still has potential

Please ignore the comments of the ignorant and proceed with your story. Seems there are those who read this type of story just to comment negatively and be insulting to the author. If they can't offer "constructive" criticism, I wish they'd stay away from topics that they regard as "offensive."

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
It's a fantasy

The idea that a woman has to "seduce" a black guy is absurd, and clearly indicates that the author only knows African Americans from movies and television. The Will Smith's are few and far between. If you have to TRY to get a homeboy to fuck you, you must have fangs and a tail.

If you have the three P's - a pulse, a purse and a pussy, consider yourself fucked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
10

10

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Dogg Shitt

Just really bad, and really, who cares what you write, it never happened.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Slut not a wife anymore.

A black cum slut. How sad.

paintrainpaintrainalmost 15 years ago
Personally I'm intrigued so far....

penasweapon, pay not attention to the ignorant jealous ravings of the inadequate ranters above. I fell your story has much potential and I look forward to the next part. Fiction is meant to break boundaries and stimulate imagination. It's just too bad that the negative posters have no imagination only hatred and no constructive criticism. Let them try to do better if they think they can. Check out my stories and let me know what you think. Hang in there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
YES

Please give us more !!! I'm a 47 year old married mom who has many erotic dreams about being taken by a large black man

Katie in NJ

Harvey8910Harvey8910over 3 years ago

i liked the story but only gave it a 4 star rating. There is so much more left to tell in this story. What happened on the road trip? Did she stay married to pencil dick? I hope there is an addition to this story soon

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