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All Comments on 'My Boss and the Office Bimbo Ch. 01'
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Anonymousabout 15 years agoGreat Beginning... now the hard part Chapter 2
Congrats and cheers on the beginning. Looking forward to ensuing chapters. Mail sent re: suggestions.
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Anonymousabout 15 years agoGreat start...
...looking for more! Hope she turns the tables on him, lol!!!
Anonymousabout 15 years agoWaiting
Until something happens, I can't see how anyone can say this was a good start. I hate overly long stories; but 2 pages???
digdaddyrichabout 15 years agoA good setup for the story
I'll be watching for the rest of the story, sounds like it will be hot. Thanks.....Rich
Anonymousabout 15 years agoOk the introductory paragraph is over, where's the
meat? So far all you did is describe the girl. No story, no plot! way to short!
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