All Comments on 'My Brother'

please continue this story, the beginning so far has been great!

Great beginning, drew us in, lets keep going, i wanna see what happens

This has to continue...please!!!

Not finished by far.

Great story. Can't wait to read more from you.

your so lucky (you’re)

thats enough (that’s)

lets go (let’s)

whats up (what’s)

must be imagening (imagining)

actually cuming (cumming)

actually persue her (pursue)

didnt help (didn’t)

drove out of the drive way (driveway)

not thats between (that’s)

Im not gonna (I’m)

I wont look (won’t)

its fine (it’s)

with matchinhg (matching)

why dont you (don’t)

look alot (a lot)

This ended rather abruptly with no hint of continuing. The only thing taboo in here was their feelings for each other. Looking forward to a sequel.