All Comments on 'My Brother'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Where's the ending?

This ended rather abruptly with no hint of continuing. The only thing taboo in here was their feelings for each other. Looking forward to a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
APOSTROPHES/SPELLING

your so lucky (you’re)

thats enough (that’s)

lets go (let’s)

whats up (what’s)

must be imagening (imagining)

actually cuming (cumming)

actually persue her (pursue)

didnt help (didn’t)

drove out of the drive way (driveway)

not thats between (that’s)

Im not gonna (I’m)

I wont look (won’t)

its fine (it’s)

with matchinhg (matching)

why dont you (don’t)

look alot (a lot)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great Beginning

Great story. Can't wait to read more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
wow!

Not finished by far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Need More!

This has to continue...please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
we need more

Great beginning, drew us in, lets keep going, i wanna see what happens

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
more!

please continue this story, the beginning so far has been great!

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