by Blondie2187
Nothing new here. A bored wife fucks the builder and continues to fuck the builder every time the husband isn't there. Then it will progress to when he is there. Same old cuck story from a female writer. Wow that's what every wife should do right? Well only if she doesn't love or respect her husband and is a round heeled slut/whore just like this so called wife.
I wish there was a better rating system than this. It's not quite a 100% but better than 75%. I hope you develop this a bit more. This is one of the better stories this week!
Well done! A fast paced short story that is erotic and interesting. The story flowed smoothly and was easy to read.
Thanks,I hope to see more of the authors work soon. And by the way; I love little married cheating slut stories. Keep up the good work.
Your husband John found out what a piece of shit slut you are, he has hired me to "dispose" of you. I am the undead, you will curse the day you were born before I am finished. Ever seen someone skinned alive??? HAHAHAHAHAHA
See 'ya at Halloween! Freddie sends his reguards!
no spelling errors and the same as all the other slut wife cheat stories. Hubby away, sexy man appears wife fucks sexy man. who just happens to have a 48" dick. Boring
They say you are what you eat or write, so we have another author who is a pig.
Two weeks should include at least one ovulating period for you, you that have no babies yet. Maybe if he isn't already, you can make a daddy out of Mark?
I think that anyone who votes (whether 100% or 0%) solely on the basis of their personal mores with scant, if not total, disregard for whether a story stands up as a literary piece should be banned from the 'Loving Wives' section - or at least their votes discounted. There's a whole bunch of sicko respondents who flagrantly downgrade any story that does not result in vengence (or 'closure' as Americans so quaintly term it). Get real - life isn't like that - and don't read stories you know from the outset that you won't like.
Hey guys thanks to all you who vote, with the exception of man in the pumpkin head. Seriously, seriously are you really going to be psychotic?
Will find out, perhaps he doesn't care, perhaps he does, hope it was worth it.
But I like classy women and this woman has none, but thats just me. You should let husband know you have a open marriage now, your fucking around and don't care if he likes it or not, that is what your saying, right?
.... here's the review."No character development,Hackneyed storyline and one more author who seems to relish what most real women find painful, both physically and emotionally"-pistolpackinpete