All Comments on 'My Creation'

because you obviously are intimidated by real women.

Wow.....you really hate women don't you? By the way, spellcheck comes equipped on every computer.....you should learn how to use it.

not once.

Yeah I agree not once did i cum, not once was I anything more than disgusted with this drivel, If this is your dream then you have my pity. The sad thing is i think with an attitude overhaul you could be a decent writer, this stoty could have been good, had your main character had any redeeming qualaties etc tho the critisism of the story is harsh dont let it put you off writing BUT do take onboard what your percived readers would enjoy not just yourself

I came buckets!!!

lol, not once, and I gave up trying to read it when he was throwing money in the air. I skimmed it though. Got the gist, but not the jizz.

Also, I suspect you may /b/ trollin'.

Rock on, my frustrated little /b/rother!

Now to jack off to ponies!

Very poor and boring, not once

this is awful

Seriously???

I just love evil main character!

It would have been better if he actually build her from scratch, not simply cloned her, by making the DNA from protein and genetically programming the caracteristics he want or simply recombined different DNA to get the best result.

god cummed like 10 times so sexy want a clone for my own!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FUCK FUCK FUCK!!!!! Oh god i'm a dirty bitch please i want your email and i will sooooooooooo send you hot and sexy nude pics of my shaved pussy and let you fuck my 34 dd breast

In all the years I have been reading erotic stories, this has to be one of the worst !

Nope, I'm not willing to suspend my disbelief for this nonsense.

I see why you gave up after 4 stories.