All Comments on 'My Dad's Co-worker'

nice try seriuosly but next time ,try a little harder

Poor conception, poor syntax, no imagination and less feeling. This writer couldn't write advertising copy for a mortuary. He has not yet learned to feel. Has to be a he because no woman would be this stupid.

Come on mate, is that all there is?

The idea was there but you need to make it work. Not even enough to stir a reaction here....

I highly suggest getting someone to proof-read your work, since I am guessing you didn't do it yourself...