by bardsy
Just seems like you've slowly pussy'd out of the main storyline lately, obviously it was kayla that was the most interesting thing about this series and the daddy daughter thing, I just can't see anyone who's been reading these really wanting to hear about kayla and someone else
Surely the previous chapter can't be the climax for B and Kaylas relationship. I hope Kayla comes back into the story stronger in the next chapter. Still intriguing though!
Ignore the other two commentors;They are obviously perverted and have sex with their family members. The story is fine as it is. I want to see a sexual encounter between Kayla and Dan.
Same wat the other said i want dan out i rather not see anything with him anymore i like the idea but love the daddy daughter thing more. Your losing the main focus of the storywhich is Kayla going for her father. Just a suggestion maybe kill off dan in war in the next chapter