All Comments on 'My fFrst Time'

I think you stopped the story too soon. After such a good build-up, we deserve to get the goods.

I loved it. Certainly it could have been longer, but the lead up was great. I felt the ending was a bit rushed (perhaps those forgotten wine glasses should have been brought in, the two of them drinking, one dressed, one towelled...). But on the whole a great glimpse.

More to come I hope!

"I disregard the proportions, the measures, the tempo of the ordinary world. I refuse to live in the ordinary world as ordinary women. To enter ordinary relationships."

"And the day came when the pain that it took to remain tight in a bud became more painful than the risk it took to blossom"

The "mistress" stuff stopped me cold. I didn't read any further.