by First_time_bi
An excellent two chapters that deserve to be followed up. Thank you.
Make the chapters longer, and continue the series. Very erotic story.
I like the way your write. I enjoy good dialogue and seeing characters discover something or grow somehow. You've got that going. There seems to be a well developed scene in which Miss Rebecca lives, and that bodes well for future chapters.
The suggestion I offer is to let your chapters get a bit longer. I think Ch. 01 and Ch. 02 would make a good chapter.
You have a pretty good story going here. It would be enjoyable to see it progress.
Very hot story but,with a lag time of two months between installments in this sequel, it tends to leave me cold.