All Comments on 'My First Threesome'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very nice

Very nice, but try to watch your grammar. Weighting should have been waiting. Other than that it was good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Rewrite

This badly needs re-writing and editing. It is full of grammar mistakes - in nearly every sentence. Get an editor!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
So hot!

Very hot! Made me so wet!

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