All Comments on 'My First Threesome'

There wasn't any part of this story that had any eroticism or ounce of believability.

it was a good start a short story, and I had fun reading it. It was to the point and was enjoyable.

easily lost in the moment, it still would have been fun to read about the people watching, perhaps some girls "gasping" with what they're seeing!

since it's at a frat party, perhaps others are watching, cheering, asking to join in?