All Comments on 'My First Woman Ch. 1'

The way you depicted lesbian sex was extremly good and very sexually arousing and stimulating I really give you more tham 75 points I would say mayby a 95 rating but definantly you deserve much more than a 75 rating In fact you were so close to a 100 that I started to rate a 100 because your story was one of the best I have read maby not the best of all the stories I read but definantly it is close to a 100 I really loved it it really turned me on big time and i really did enjoy masterbing to this stor

on some sort of plot and characterization for your next chapter if you wish to write a story because where it is now its not even close.

honey, tease the brain first in erotic prose it leads to nether regions.