by OlderButtWiser
Man what a story! You are a very interesting writer and spin very great tales. Loved this story from word one. Thanks for sharing it with us.
A well written story, with realistic characters, character development, and a well developed plot. Thank you..
The sex was marvelous, but the story was absolutely superb. There is a lot of slam bang thank you Ma'am writing on Literotica but once in a while something else comes up. I have followed Literotica for years and this has to be one of the very best Novellas that I have read. An interesting story with all sorts of twists and turns, stunning erotic writing and a story line that ends up with almost everybody happy - what more could one ask. Thank you many times
What a well written love story. You wrote fantastic sex scenes, but you also captured my heart with the love between them. I’m an old 71 year old emotional wreck, but you had me misty eyed several times.
Fantastic love story, which I devoured over 2 days. One concern—he’ll be 80 by the time his daughter graduates university. Probably not a great actuarial choice.