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All Comments on 'My Life as a Softcore Erotica'

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centauri4centauri4over 15 years ago
Ended to suddenly

Not a bad story, but plently of potential to end better or leave readers what would be happening next. I like your use of the inhibition lowering situation, but even that could have been a little more explicit.

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