All Comments on 'My New Pet Robot 07'

by Beatnic_jazzman

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redlion75redlion75about 11 years ago

its starting to not be worth reading half a scene for this little bit of a story. act 1 scene 1 paragrapgh 1 doesnt really make me want to find out what is next. plus for them to GRANT him access to something only he can understand in hte first place is idiotic he should have been a priority access holder.

sailandoarsailandoarabout 11 years ago
I'm impatient .......

... so thank you for the chance to practice my patience. Surrounded by riches and fed a very nice story in dribs and drabs it is easy to fall into the "focus on what I lack" trap, so thank you for the chance to practice my patience.

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