All Comments on 'My New Place'

I saw everything in my mind’s eye. Quite exciting. Your protagonist is a very naughty young lady. I am curious about what happens next …of course I am reading this much after you have completed many more chapters, but so what, it will be interesting getting to know you through your character … well, why not, you are an exhibitionist. Loving it.

Mr Feathers (or Dale if you like informality)

Short and sweet, and my favourite genre of older, hot female exhibiting herself to younger male. Excellent story. Thanks for writing.

trying to work on the next chapter, but I want to add some more detail which can take some time to get right.

Never mind more stories lets have more of this story please. Great start to what could be a super sexy series, can't wait for the next chapter.

Quick, down and dirty. This is *hopefully* an obvious set-up for something more to happen. You used good description and it was easy to read. I hope the next story has a little more fill, a little more set-up, like the woman's thoughts about what she might do or preparation, like shaving or showering and oiling up to be in front of the window. Keep going!

Super good job! Well written and very exciting!

More chapters?