All Comments on 'My Special Gift Ch. 01'

Will be looking for more of this interesting and erotic story. Thanks.

This could be a very interesting series.

Ohio. How did he get Diana? Will there be incest in his memories? You may hit every genre on the site, carrying us along on a wave of eroticism. Good writing, as usual!!!

Disappointing story by a normally fine writer like Ohio. Reads like a teen-age fantasy not like something written by an excellant writer.

the Ct. Yankee

Sad that you didn't continue the series. Maybe a dark turn where a girl,on her own, dumped Her fiancé for him, and found she was pregnant. Show I've negative side of mind control

Chilley

Congrats. Interesting story. Four out of five.Every one of your stories are LW except this one and for some reason I have never read it until now which is odd since you are one of my favourite writers.

While interesting and well written, it seems conventional for its genre. Normally an Ohio story has lots of twists and clever turns. Obviously it is 7 years old and there has been no follow up yet, but I am curious where this would have gone. Maybe one day we will see. Cheers Steve

He is a seriously disturbed disease.

Rape is rape.

He is forcing women.

Pretty shitty concept here.

WTF??? I for one am glad this series was never finished. I’ve at least somewhat liked all the of “ohio’s” stories I’ve read (in order down the list), if not out right loved them. But this???

“Obi-wan, you’re our only hope.” It works for a sectagenarian British actor playing a space/sci-fi knight, but imagine Alec Guiness using the same powers to pick up chicks. Just not right. And not believable. Though, maybe Michael Caine...

This "special gift" is used as an excuse for rape - disgusting!

Pure fantasy, but a nice thought,,, How does he keep his wife from finding out? How much control does he have over men?

Pity he didn't get Amy pregnant,to see who he could manipulate to get out of that.

Fun story.

Bill S.

If only. Thanks for your writing.

Great imagination! Loved it! I want that power too.

Bill S.

Sorry, this is RAPE and I don't like it in fiction any more than otherwise.

Great story hopefully you pick it up again and continue!!!!!

Rape story. Not very original Come On Ohio you can do much better than this!