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All Comments on 'My TBI becomes Total Brain Instruct'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
OK, Could Be More Challenging

Pretty good story, but you make it too easy for the protagonist. There could be some resistance, challenge in the subjects. Make it harder for him, introduce some conflict.

Military MechMilitary Mechabout 16 years ago
Excellent!

Excellent Story.... Mabey you should "go back" to the time of the injury.... Can't wait to see what happens!

Semper Fi!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Hawt

Really liked it, can't wait for the sequel!

jott50jott50about 9 years ago
great job!!!

hot hot hot!!!

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30+ years in the Marine Corps. Love to ride---Harleys too :). Current Ride is a 2017 CVO Street Glide.