All Comments on 'My Wife's Love'

by SparkleKitty

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betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 9 years ago
Damn

A future divorce is imminent.

no rating

hplitprincehplitprinceover 9 years ago
Best wife E V E R!

Great story, he is indeed a lucky man!

frank4052frank4052over 9 years ago

"betrayedbylove" the author is female and the story is fiction, so dont takeout you on failures on her

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
betradeby love needs some help. he also needs to be banded from here

he got his nuts crushed by some woman God knows how long ago and is reaming ever LW writer since then. He needs to GO!!

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 9 years ago
Damn

What's with the love here? I didn't do nuthin'

honeylicker1124honeylicker1124over 9 years ago
I figured...

that Patty was more than "just a friend." No telling how long these two lesbians had been lovers before hubby found out. Will be interested in finding out the back-up plan. They may get their children yet with a surrogate "friend." 5*'s

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Every mans dream but no matter how much he wanted it to happen he should have turned it down. If you truly love someone than its not the size of their tits or cocks but a full package.storie where woman cheat with a guy because his dick is huge drives me crazy. That is not the way people should solely judge each other

swingerjoeswingerjoeover 9 years ago
Not bad

It's not bad as a quick little fantasy piece. I really don't understand the people who read these stories for the purpose of casting their own morality on each and every character in each and every story. Do these guys never fantasize? Is there no room for fantasy even in fiction? I can't imagine how miserable they must be.

bustyalixbustyalixover 9 years ago
Good job!

As a puff piece I thought this fared extremely well. Though not without it's challenges you could potentially turn this into a series. I especially liked that you went for the first-person male perspective; something I've yet to tackle. Overall good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice short story

A realistic situation that seems to work out for everyone. Some small breasted women desire seeing and playing with big tits as much as some men.

phd70phd70over 9 years ago
The 'purpose' of Hubby having sex with Patty was to get her Pregnant! Didn't look like that even happened in the story!

Problem: the story ignored the priority of getting Patty pregnant. Not even sure that hubby had vaginal sex with Patty! Can't get Patty pregnant with anal intercourse, or vaginal intercourse with Wife! What goes?? Keep in mind the plot! Dan. 2 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
So, you had it going so well,.....

....why not have them all declare their mutual love, move in together (I guess that means that Patty would move in with our couple), and proceed to make babies together.

Or hey, why not write some miracle treatment or surgery that allows Laura to have children.......just three weeks after Patty gets pregnant.

Then with bi-Laura and bi-Patty having all the fun they could stand, you could add another non-bi girl that would be exclusive to our protagonist.

Hell, you could add two or three more...then someone introduces another man and suddenly, you have a commune!

TLMorganTLMorganabout 9 years ago
A very intiguring story!

Would love to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Couldn't she have gotten a tit job?

oldtwitoldtwitabout 4 years ago
Oh yes please

Oh what a lucky man, love the idea of my other half doing this for me, fast nicely written but quite short.

nonprofit60nonprofit608 months ago

Wow! I'd prefer you draw it out much longer, but beautifully done.

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