All Comments on 'My Wonderful Secret Ch. 03'

OMG! I thought she'd never lose her virginity but finally it happened. I love the way you kept me guessing if it was going to happen right up to the very end. Taking a cock up your back passage for the first time is a big deal, and I thought you captured the anxiety and nerves of the young lovers very cleverly. I hope they go on to become truly intimate and comfortable with each others bodies and needs. Great work! Can't wait for Ch 4.

...Variations in Human Sexuality! Oh Wow... I can't believe I read my own progression down that rabbit hole. Unfortunately everything you describe so well occurred for me when I was much too young to put it in Literotica. I'm so glad you described it as perfectly as you did. I don't know how much of this is reality and how much is fictional but your description of the actual progression of trying to understand this "human function" was incredibly close to my own, so I really am thankful for that trip down memory lane! You write very well and this chapter was especially emotional for me, but your writing was a great help in feeling as if I was back in the library trying to figure it out all over again. Thanks for sharing this with us, and I'll be looking for more from you. Cheers! --- Josie

I'll have no cred

And I'll have no class

Till I get that cock

Up my girly-boy ass

I want to feel

Like a loud bell tolls

When I get that cum

Pumpin' in my hole!

your attention to detail is well developed and you paint an excellent picture of your characters, the moment, and your emotions. I feel like a voyeur. I'm looking forward to chapter four.