by toofeeky4u
Unfinished story, no activity for 5 years... but still worth reading. Who knows, the author might come back and finish it up some day.
Black women can have natural hair and it get really long. It just takes care and maintenance. Or, they could have it in locs or braids. Sources: Experience
Shut up you racist freaks! I think the story is going great.
just sayin
I'm sorry, but the moment I read 'Your Highness' I couldn't read on. It was hilarious and arrogant. Couldn't help thiking it probably reflects your whole story. But thats just my opinion of course.
Jake
I pretty much have to say this story has me laughing half the time. It is almost as if you have the responses to Conall's over protectiveness taken right off my tongue. I feel like Natalie is a character i could relate too. And that's part of what's loveable about this story. (aside from a hot were and unbelievable sex. lol)
i just got ask why does almost every story the woman has to be
a virgin or not a virgin but not well know in the sex department
why can't there be for once a well know to lots of sex!!!!!!l
and I realized I had never read the 1chapter. This is really good an I'm glad I found it. Going to chapter 2 right now!
By the way, congrats on your first submission to Lit!
It ought to prove pretty interesting to read how Conall gets past Natalie's work ethic force field....He's got power and position. Let's see him work his mojo on his mate.
Maybe saving her could be a great intro for him...............can't wait!!!!
I like the beginning... hopefully the next chapter will be longer.
wow!! I hope the guys dont do anything that will get them killed....but where is the fun in that??? Great chapter! I like how Nat has a hottub and drinks wine!!!! LOL!
wit that being said keep up the good work
but a couple of the sentences were incoherent..i.e
"She was already Were brother." ???
Looking forward to the next chapter and it's a good thing that chose to visit her.