All Comments on 'Nathan's Journey Ch. 02'

This is a great story...nice buildup..I just can't wait for the next chapter.

it was ok but i hate all the cheating it is totally unnecessary all the anger was also a little off putting i don't know if you will continue this or not but even if you do i may not read it you seem to have way of ruining your stories and driving away the readers

The way you depict the characters made me feel for them, hope that Nathans journey continues and leads him to hapinness.

I'm a mature man and you almost made me cry.

The ending left a lot of unanswered questions about the story. Unless this happened in real life, a different ending sure would have helped.

You need to finish this story!!! Pretty good stuff. I liked it but I hate that it is left hanging like that

even if that really happened its not finished yet needs at least a minimum of 1-2 more chapters or 5-6 full pages i was really into it as it ended was kinda pissed off when i realized it was over already ... haha well please get another chapter out for us loyal readers of good stories

You must not just leave us hanging like this. We need more. In other words what happens next??

This is the Ultimate Cliffhanger. Does Amy go after Nate? What does Nate do? Does Amy tell her brother she loves him back?

i can't put it better that what was already stated, this is the ultimate cliffhanger. I only hope that if/when he confronts his ex, he makes her cry and see what she left behind, she should not get the last word period.. hope you finish this story soon..

What a nut punch by both brother and sister. I feel really bad for nate.